They do not have to be full sentences-- clauses and phrases work.
Ms. Picard -
-the rumble of the train starting
-the squeaking of the train cars clashing
-I remember the taste of the warm sugar and cinnamon buried into the soul of apples.
Mrs. Tatro:
-the smell of diesel fuel
-shaking back and forth like a roller coaster
-the delicious apple pie we made
-going on the train ride and hearing the sound of the clickity-clack, clickety, clack.
ReplyDelete-when we took off, the sound of the train leaving the station, rumble rumble pssssttt.
-I remember the sweet sugary smell of apple pie and cinnamon in the apple pies we baked.
-the beautiful scenery of fall the golden, red, and yellow and orange leaves of foliage on the trees all out through woods and having the sweet smell of fall in the air with all the maple syrup from the sweet maple trees and the sweet dewy air and the beau
Autumn is coming around again. This is a great time to pick apples. My favorite kind of apples are fuji apples. Everyone carves a pumpkin in autumn, FOR HALLOWEEN. Autumn is a really great month , don't you agree.
ReplyDelete-The good smell and taste of the apple pie
ReplyDelete-The sound of the train going down the tracks
-The feel of the rocks at the Monthshire
-The sight of the ripe red apples on the trees
- the diesel going rumble rumble down the track
ReplyDelete-the screeching of the air brakes
-also the swaying of the cars going back and forth
-and the cheap impression of a steam train whistle
watching Nick climb a tree to try to find the biggest and the reddest apple
ReplyDeletea moving train swaying back and forth as it moves
a homemade apple pie fresh baked from Miss Picard's stove